well this my little story, so no nicking or i'll be after you. also you lot no how my spellings are like so, yeah. Anyway enjoy! and say what u think.
Chapter 1, Part 1
The sea was very carm for this time of year. It had been known to reach the very top of the cliffs and giving pass byers a light coating of salty water. However, this winter the sea lord was being kind and giving the eroding cliffs a brake. The ocean’s colour of inky blue was given a light dusting of silver from the commanding Moon.In the far distant, an old church chime out its one hour message into the empty night sky; met by the thousands of stars. Only one person was near enough to hear the last 12th chime, however she never heard it at all; it was the last thing on her mind. Unlike everything around her, she seems to radiate her own bluely white glow, increase by her white clothing and pale face. Her untied black hair was left to be lightly frown in the cold breezes which also carried the fine mist she breath out. Her eyes match the colour of the ocean but that was not what she seeing. She never moved, not even to shiver from the bitter cold of the night. All she was doing was waiting…waiting. The Moon slowly crawled across the sky and still she waited. It wasn’t till an hour before sunrise that she turned away from the sea to face the new comer that slowly climbs the hill. It was easier to see him because the sky was starting to show its lights blues and picky yellow; it was going to be a lovely day. ‘You have been out here all night haven’t you? Even those you knew I would only come one hour before darwn’, the old man stood in front of her and smile. ‘I know but I needed to think for a bit, that’s all’ her voice was light but strong not showing the emotions that fort inside her. ‘You know what you have to do, the next one has shown her self and it is your task to help her.’ He was dress in the same way as her and had the same paled skin and looked around 50 however she knew he was a lot older than that. ‘What happens now?’ she had some idea from what she had heard from others but she didn’t know what to say instead.‘Let’s not talk of that for now, I only have ten minuets left.’ He was quite for a bit but then said, ‘Even those I never had children in my own life, I would have thought them to be a bit like you. I am very proud of you.’She couldn’t help it now as the very first of thousands of tears started to fall. ‘i will never forget you,’ and then she was hugging him. She could feel the warmth of the sun on her back and nearly fell forwards, just seeing the last of his eyes until he was no longer there.
find out what happents next for some time next week - or when i get the time
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