Wednesday, 17 January 2007

Lord of Destiny C4

this time round its about 1000 words so i've cut it in have so that you don't have to read the hole thing... so yeah same as before.

Chapter 4

The drive to school was complete silence. This was weird for however tired her mum was, she always loved to hear all the things she been up to. Then Mrs Whitemoor missed the turning that would take her up to school and Ashley found herself shouting to be heard.When they finery got to school, she was 5 minuets within the bell, however she liked to sit on the bench for a bit before being imprisoned. She saw many of her friends were here but none of them saw her even if they did look her way, it was as if she wasn’t there.Now she was sitting down on the bench. It was very old and had a memory plate on it. The person it was remembering died in 1901 but the name had been rusted away only leaving the last name of the child; … it just showed how old the school really was.All of a sudden, the bell rang out calling to all the students of years, although Ashley didn’t move. A group of people were walking towards her but something told her that they weren’t going to ask were the entrance was. They all looked very different to each other. One was dressed in simple work cloths when another one was in a very expensive looking dress. The group was made up of five people, three men and two women all of different ages. “Hello there,” this was said by the light voice of the woman in the dress; she looked to be in her 20 and was very pretty. “Don’t worry we are just going to talk but you have to come with us first. Then we will tell you what’s happening, ok?”“I don’t think so. Why on earth would I go with you?” Ashley made a move to get up. “Fine, we’ll have to do it the hard way,” and at that a great force pined her back to the bench, making her gasp for breath. How did that happen?One of the men smiles, “I thought you said that this would be hard to do, Sky.” He soon lost the smile when he was flying through the air and went in to the wall. His neck was at a weird angle and every one was watching him when he vanished. However there was no puff of smoke like in Charmed or Buffy, they just fade away, but Ashley wasn’t really thinking about this at the time.“I was wondering when you would show, we all know how much you love this place,” the one called Sky said this to someone out of Ashley sight. “Well you know how much I love these get-to-gathers but I am very busy and must be going” and at that the group of people were thrown back. However, sky was ready and was still standing smiling. “Oh is that all you can do”

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